Wednesday, December 16, 2020

Summer holiday project week one number 2

 For today we where meant to watch this video and then make a little our own comix with the little comix strip they gave us I really enjoyed this but it was also hard.

The reason why it was hard was because I couldn't watch the YouTube clip because It needed to be Confirmed that I was able to watch it.

The fun part was that I got to make the comix how I wanted which was really fun but I don't think thats what they would have said though.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Rianna,

    My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.

    I thought this activity was really fun as I enjoyed seeing all the cool and funny comic ideas everyone came up with.

    I thought your introduction to the activity was very well written and you explained your task well. I like that your comic focuses more on the fishing and banter rather than the character losing and finding his teeth. I think it was entertaining and well written and a great job!

    Do you think your comic was similar to the original story, what changes did you make?

    I would also suggest that it may have been easier to simply include a photo of the comic rather than the entire slide.

    Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.

    Ngā mihi nui,
    Zana Yates

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